Hi Folks,

So sorry, I am not going to post the shark video here as it contains some scenes that are not suitable for young children. :) What Miss Loh showed all of you in class was only part of the video without the unsuitable scenes.

Anyway for your composition, please remember to add in feelings of the character. It's very important for writing good essays... and describe it in detail, not just simple words like "scared', 'frightened'... Instead, use phrases like 'scared out of his wits', 'he froze in fear and his heart pounded madly as the shark approached'

Happy writing Dearies!

Love,
Miss Loh